On one night I see the night thieves. I follow them down the road and they go into a dark scary house. I see what they are doing through the window. I called the police and they said that it was abandoned. I got out of my car and went Bang!! I hear something I run outside. I'm so scared I go back in and there it is gold and money I see that there is a gang of them. I wonder if my watch is in there and I finally saw it. When the cops arrived. The police said “get on the ground” they said “Don’t kill us” the thieves went and they ran out the back door. I ran after them but they got away so next time I see them I will run after them.
The End
Kia ora Toby,
ReplyDeleteIt is great to see you have used correct punctuation throughout your text, ka pai!
I love how you included a picture for your writing.
Perhaps next time you could end your story with a cliffhanger.
Keep up the great work!
:)